Tuesday, 19 May 2015

Foul shot 
In writing this week we have been learning about the poem foul shot. We had to use verbs , 2 stanzas ,actions on a new lines .

With ten seconds hanging on the clock
she looks around and sees determined faces
She measures the the mat
Balances herself steady
Lines herself up
Runs faster and faster  
Flicks her legs
She lands
Wobbles ,
Tips ,
And then                      
                                         And then
Lands ,
Lands cleanly

Just in the cusp of time.

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